Wednesday, 8 December 2021
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Hi kupa,
ReplyDeleteI love our lay out of the information. I think it is really interesting.
hi kupa
ReplyDeleteit look good :)
Hello Kupa,
ReplyDeleteYour lay out is amazing, and the pictures really helped me visualize what you wrote. But Kupa, I can clearly see that you copy and pasted the information. DONT DO THAT! It is important to write information in your own words. But overall, you did quite a good job. (Take my advice, and it will improve your writing.)
-Wendy
Kia Ora Kupa,
ReplyDeleteI really like the lay out. You did it so well. I never knew there was a flying squid. Keep up the good work! Maybe check your writing for Capital letters and full stops at the start of a name or start of a sentence or the end of the sentence.
Carys >U<
i like it
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