My Awesome holiday
For my holiday my Family and I went to Queens town there names are Nikua Neavah Tamati Mum and Dad. We woke in the morning at 5am to drive to wellington airport so we didn't get stuck in traffic. We made it to the airport our flight was soon so we got ready and we were on the plane it was a 10 minute wait for the plane to take off. then the captain said the flight was taking off. Soon we were in the air it was a 1 and a half hour flight to queenstown i was so exited because it was my first time in the south island and queens town i have heard there were a lot of cool things there. Once we got to queens town we went to the cookie time store there were so many cookies so i got a cookie ice cream. Then we went to our hotel.. We were just resting in our room then we went to sleep. The next day we went straight to the lodge it was only me Mum Neavah and Tamati so my Mum went with Tamati because he is a baby so i had to race my sister i won once and anther and then she won once. So then we went and booked a robot shark that you sit in and do jumps. So we came back the next day which was our last day me and my sister were the only ones who did it so we went in the shark we were in there for 45 minutes. After that me and my Dad went to go get a mothers day present. Then we went back to the hotel and had a rest the next morning we were at the airport and on the plane we got home and it was a awesome time at Queens town.
Hello Kupa. Your story is pretty interesting, but I think you need to proofread it again. There are a lot of mis wrote words.
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