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Friday, 21 August 2020

up in the clouds


Up in the clouds


He was high in the clouds on top of the Burj Khalifa building. Helping stack people on the top. with his grip risking his life to save everyone. With no air but one air tude he ran out ang shrageilled to get up to the top holding a laser to chop the cage open when he got up there the people were screaming” help please help” he got the laser out but every one was watching and they thort he was going to bern them off the building. he burnt the cage with the laser and it opened the man got the people out and when he got back to the ground every one was cheering then he saw a poster that said the building safer john the tower safer then on the top of the Burj Khalifa was a big fire so he began to climb up the building when he got to the top he had noting to put the fire out with so he used hes t shirt but from not long from the building there was a plane coming strath for the Burj Khalifa building he had no choice but to jump  he took a big jump of the building but the plane was under hem he had a parachute he used it then the planecrashet right into the building. And the man got out in time but the parachute didn't work so he had to do something he didn't know what to do so the people on the ground had to do something so they got a crash pad and the man landed on the crash pad. And when he got to the ground everyone was cheering so he put his feet on the concrete. the crash pad did some damage his head had scars and cuts from the big fire and the plane fire. But he saved the building and everyone but he had to go up in the clouds again.  


1 comment:

  1. Hi Kupa it's Kasey. I liked the way you had people trapped at the top of the crane. It was very exciting. I would freak out if I was that high up. Try using paragraphs next time.

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