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Thursday, 30 July 2020

                 The Storm
               The storm is  a approaching elephant
                The big gray dangerous animal
               It stomps all over the jungle securing all animals
               Like a big gray shower with its track
               With hes track slapping everything in hes site
               It destroys everything with hes big gray body
             With hes hole body he can knock down a hole building
            He is so big that no one can catch hem
           storming crashing and destroying
            Big bright and dangerous.

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous30 July 2020 at 11:16

    Hello Kupa! Your poem is interesting with how you described it. There is a few spelling errors with words like his and him. My poem was about a horse, but two years ago i was about a fox. Bye!

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