One day, a long time ago, there was a place and it was called Jurassic park. It had dinosaurs that day. A boy called tim, came when he was 15. He liked to investigate dinosaur bones. But when he got there there was a big line. So many people were there. “O no” said Tim “there is a big line”. So he got into the line. 1 hour later he finally got to the front of the line and in he went. Taking photo after photo. Until no one was there when he turned around he saw fighter jets hitting all of the dinosaurs and he saw his friend running away and tripped over. thomm ppp the t rex eat hem “noooooo” said Tim. But the t rex heard him and Tim started to run as fast as he could. Jets shooting at the t rex but messing and blowing up everything. Then tim sore a jep and he did not know how to drive. Tim drove away fast but the dinosaur kept up with them. Then Tim stole a phone but the dinosaur crushed it. Then the jep stopot. “Oh no out of gas” said Tim. Tim ran so fast the t rex was chasing him, around the pack. Then, Tim hid around the corner hiding from the t rex. “I….need .....to get out of here” said Tim. so Tim ran for his life. Running faster and faster, but then he saw something not, anything it was a..........T rex “a...nother one come, on '' said Tim. But the t rex ran past Tim “what” said Tim it just ran past me. The ather trex ran at the one that was running, for Tim. they ran at each other. They started to fight each other. Then Tim ran out and the good t rex won. Then the good, t rex started to run away. Then a car came and it was Tim's mum.
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Hi kupa
ReplyDeleteIt’s a great story with a lot of info.I have seen a dinosaur bone before.Try getting you punctuation in the right places, and putting capitals.